Tuesday, October 28, 2008

Photo Blogpost


Dear Soldiers






Why is that I can no longer see? How could this happen to me?

I once could see the whole world so pretty and but now it's so bare
To be so mean to someone I wouldn't dare

My whole life has changed with sadness and dispair
and it's like you don't even care







I can no longer see what I used to could

to see again anything I would

It hurt so bad and burned
How this could happen I will never learn

For me they had no concern






I feel so different now that I cannot see

If it never happend oh how different life would be
Just explain why to me

It doesn't make any sense to me


Just how it came to be

It's still hard for me to believe

that this was done to me






Blind eyes









1 comment:

carrie said...

This one is good, but it could use some more details about how the gas affected the eyes to make it stronger. 32/35 points.